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[hugmyscythe]

If you've encountered any issues with how I rp Dead Master, please let me know here.

Jade

MUN: drinksteapots AIM: N/A PLURK: drinksteapots CHARACTER: Dead Master

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I don't know how helpful this is as crit, but I have been finding that the way her sentences are broken up and left/right/center aligned makes her really hard to read. :(

[hugmyscythe]

The formatting for her speech pattern is inferred from her a slightly disturbed, broken, and convoluted nature. For all intents and purposes, it is supposed to be confusing (or obnoxious or creepy, etc.) in how she speaks- jumping from phrase to word to phrase in an almost mock-echo effect. The alternative would be using ellipses, although ellipses imply a more passive, thoughtful feel to speech- while the formatted breaks convey a staggered edge and emphasize certain words by isolating them.

With the above in mind, I would of course be happy to change it have her "talk...like this...with ellipses" or with no breaks at all if it would make her speech less confusing OOCly if that'd be helpful! Although, I'd have to know who you are first. If you like, you can shoot me a PM and next time if/when we ever tag I'll format it the way you'd like it to be.

[(Anonymous)]

I'm just a lurker, but I absolutely love your characterization of DM and her interactions with everyone at EV.

[hugmyscythe]

!!! Thank you, anon! I'm glad you like her. :)

[(Anonymous)]

Dead Master and pretty much everyone you've played ever are awesome. I think you should feel fantastic about your play here.

[hugmyscythe]

Oh wow! Thank you, anon. :D I'm not sure if your 'here' means EV, DDD, or DWRP in general, but this is definitely good news to hear all the same!

[(Anonymous)]

Dead Master's one of my favorites here, and I just wanted you to know that I love her and you.

[hugmyscythe]

First of all, sorry it took a while to get back to you, anon! But thank you for this comment. I hope to do a lot more with her soon-- assuming that you mean EV.